Sunday, May 3, 2015

Dreams Poetry 5-3-15

Prompts:  1)  "Using "To A Mouse" by Robert Burns as inspiration, write a short poem expressing what happens when you have a dream and it doesn't come true."  2)  "Based on your brainstorming via Edmodo, write a short poem elaborating on your dream and/or why dreams or visions are an important part of life."

Date:  5-3-15

When Dreams Break Down

Anticipations
Special destinations
Dreams of work or jobs
Dream vacations

Work hard, you may
Fight, try, and also pray
The reality within
Might choose not to stay

All about your goal, you'll want to learn
Until suddenly, your interest takes a turn
Something else big, then fills your mind
At the blink of an eye, you've lost concern

As you can see, plans don't always work out
However, nothing will be gained, by starting to pout
The road to a new possibility
Should be your new route

As a door shuts, another is left ajar
New visions will be seen, from very afar
Feelings of doubt and hardship, will fill your head
But you can do it, reach for that star
  

Total Happiness 

My ultimate dream, plan, or scheme
Is to compete on a professional basketball team
But that's not all, not even half
I want to be around people I love, who make me laugh

Family and friends, are the most important part
Without them in my heart, I wouldn't know where to start
People to come home to, while knowing
They'd keep me and growing

Dreams for us, are very much a necessity 
When it comes to keeping us trying, goals are the recipe
Without our will to try hard for our dreams, and endure the suffering
Life's meaning, would add up to nothing


2 comments:

  1. I think this was a good blog. I can see your poem is general and not personal. I like how you used rhyme schemes, but you weren't supposed to do both blogs. Overall, this was a great blog.

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  2. I like how your poem, (like what Nick said), it was more of a general poem. Also, I liked how you set up your rhyme scheme, it was very unique.

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